On the 14th of May 2018 I recorded the dialogue part of the scrip which I had previously written. I had to wait up until this date as that the guitar I was going to use was broken an I decided to wait to see if it would be possible to use it in this project. It was however clear on this date that it was beyond repair.
I used garage band to record my script and have provided images of me doing this below:
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| here I am recording my script. Reading it into the microphone in the recording space |
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| After recording my script I made sure that it sounded ok in garage band before saving it and leaving the studio. |
After recording the parts that I needed to speak I went onto the internet in order to find a piece of royalty free music that would suit the tone of the advertisement I was trying to create. I had to use royalty free sound as that (as I have stated in my Legal and ethical issues section of this blog) I could be potentially sued if I were to use the copyrighted material of somebody else. In order to find music that would not be under copyright protection and therefore be legal to use I went to the creator studio of youtube (however I did not end up considering any of the sounds which I found there) as well as www.Freesound.co.uk and searched for indie music as well as metal sound effects (These were the sounds that I had stated above that I would need. Below I have linked all of the sounds that I thought would be appropriate for this piece of work.
Music Parts:
https://freesound.org/people/abett/sounds/316703/
https://freesound.org/people/aceinet/sounds/415780/
https://www.youtube.com/audiolibrary/music
Sound effects:
https://freesound.org/people/magnus589/sounds/184580/
https://freesound.org/people/michorvath/sounds/270589/
After downloading all of these sound effects I could begin putting together my advert. I have shown how I did this below:
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| Now the formerly unusable sound clip was made appropriate to be a part of my final product. |
Version One:
After Making sure that the diolouge section of my work was usable I inserted it into a multitrack format meaning that I could start adding new parts to it. I have show the audition programme after creating the first edit of my work below. I have added the anvil sound, cropped it and copied it 4 times to make it sound like a counting to the music which Is put afterwards. I felt that this music was the most appropriate as that It was lo-fi as I wanted and includes solely an electric guitar with a "Reverb" (echo) effect on it and was therefore the closest thing I could find to what I wanted to create had I had the chance. After adding both if these sounds I put the desired echo effect on my voice by going to SFX > Creative > Heavy reverb. I feel like this edit was a good starting point for the product which I was trying to create. (I have uploaded it to youtube so that it can be viewed here:)
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| The audition programme for this first version of the advert. |
Version Two:
There were several changes that needed to be made to the first version of my work in order to create a second version which would come closer to achieving the vision which I had for the advertisement. The most minor of these changes were that I felt that the anvil chime sound effects were too loud and would better serve their purpose as a musical count in if I was to shorten them down so that there was less time between each of the sounds. I did this fairly quickly by simply deleting all but one of the sound effects, cropping the remaining one and then copying it 4 times so that the effect was achieved again. After doing this my next correction was that I wanted to make the music in the advert fade out which I again did quite quickly by using the option for a fade out which adobe audition makes very easy to find.
My final problem to solve was that I had to balance the sound that I had created so that the dialogue was the easiest to hear but none of the other sounds were lost. This took me some time as that I wanted to make sure that the sounds were perfect and up to a professional standard.
The second version of the advert is available below:
Version three:
I wanted this version to appear less empty which I thought could be achieved by adding an ambiance track as well as some of the other tracks which I had downloaded earlier on. I downloaded the track that I used from this address:
https://freesound.org/people/Zabuhailo/sounds/194438/\
As well as this while putting this version together I hadn't made any attempt to make my advertisement fit into the typical length intervals that a redio advert should and therefore it would not be able to be used in a professional situation. The ad as it was In version two is around 30 seconds long. While 30 seconds is one of the acepted lengths in the industry I decided that this was too long as that it had over 10 seconds where all that could be heard was the music. For this reason I halted the length of the ad. I feel like the shorter length makes it fit the codes and conventions o f a typical radio advert more as that no radio advert would ever have as long a time playing only music as version 2 of mine did.
This is the third version of my ad:
Final version before presenting to a member of my target audience:
After the third version of my advert I was confident in the professional standard that my work lived unto and therefore only changed some of the sound missing as well as the intensity of the effect on my voice for my final advert.
This is the final version I have created. I fell like I have utilised professional working practices in order to create a product which is up to a professional standard as well as fitting for the tone and target audience that I am trying to reach.
Presentation to members of the target audience:
After this version was finished I decided that it was time for me to present it to a member of the target audience so that I could gain some feedback that would fairly represent the interests of my target audience. I obtained my feedback through showing the advert to a freeind who is of the target audience as well as by adding the advert to a sbreddit which allows people to gather data. This means that some of the data was submitted by people who weren't interested in the project.
After compiling the things that both the people on the internet as well as my friend had noticed was wrong with the advert. The only major complaint which could be fixed was that the dialogue was to quiet and they couldn't hear it.
Here is a screenshot of Survey monkey:
Here is the final version:
























